First Chapter Review and Feedback




It’s possible to tell a lot from a first chapter. It’s the most important chapter of all when it comes to getting an agent or selling your book to a publisher—or, more important still, hooking a reader so she keeps turning the pages.

In this mini-package, I will review your first chapter (up to 20 pages, double-spaced, Times New Roman 12pt, 1″ margins all around—no more than 7,000 words—and give you developmental feedback on the chapter’s strengths and weaknesses and suggestions for revision.